I’ve officially unpacked the Honda and bought a mattress and got settled into a tiny Boston studio, so I have not had any time to write, but I did have a moment of clarity and figured out a quick way to make the story feel a bit punchier: cut about a fifth of the text.
As I’ve said in like 90% of my blog posts here, a new draft of Miners is now up!
Miners, a sci fi novel, 2-3 hour read
I will put in a few more rounds of revision to get a better structure and flow, but it should now be in its most readable form to date. I can send over kindle and nook formats, too, just send me your e-mail.
As always, comments are appreciated!